{"id":1297,"date":"2017-12-30T01:35:18","date_gmt":"2017-12-30T01:35:18","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/writing.wisc.edu\/wac\/?p=1297"},"modified":"2019-07-23T03:05:13","modified_gmt":"2019-07-23T03:05:13","slug":"electronic-comments-on-a-student-paper-in-sociology","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/dept.writing.wisc.edu\/wac\/electronic-comments-on-a-student-paper-in-sociology\/","title":{"rendered":"ELECTRONIC COMMENTS ON A STUDENT PAPER IN SOCIOLOGY"},"content":{"rendered":"\t\t<div data-elementor-type=\"wp-post\" data-elementor-id=\"1297\" class=\"elementor elementor-1297 elementor-bc-flex-widget\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<section class=\"elementor-section elementor-top-section elementor-element elementor-element-jveanig elementor-section-full_width elementor-section-height-min-height elementor-section-items-top elementor-section-content-top elementor-section-height-default\" data-id=\"jveanig\" data-element_type=\"section\" data-e-type=\"section\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-container elementor-column-gap-narrow\">\n\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-column elementor-col-100 elementor-top-column elementor-element elementor-element-mkiwuev\" data-id=\"mkiwuev\" data-element_type=\"column\" data-e-type=\"column\">\n\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-wrap elementor-element-populated\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-element elementor-element-khoshzb elementor-widget elementor-widget-heading\" data-id=\"khoshzb\" data-element_type=\"widget\" data-e-type=\"widget\" data-widget_type=\"heading.default\">\n\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-container\">\n\t\t\t\t\t<h2 class=\"elementor-heading-title elementor-size-medium\">Professor Jim Raymo\n(Sociology)\n<\/h2>\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/section>\n\t\t\t\t<section class=\"elementor-section elementor-top-section elementor-element elementor-element-mmixpwu elementor-section-content-middle elementor-section-boxed elementor-section-height-default elementor-section-height-default\" data-id=\"mmixpwu\" data-element_type=\"section\" data-e-type=\"section\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-container elementor-column-gap-default\">\n\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-column elementor-col-100 elementor-top-column elementor-element elementor-element-anfzcxw\" data-id=\"anfzcxw\" data-element_type=\"column\" data-e-type=\"column\" data-settings=\"{&quot;background_background&quot;:&quot;classic&quot;}\">\n\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-wrap elementor-element-populated\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-element elementor-element-geiprbi elementor-widget elementor-widget-text-editor\" data-id=\"geiprbi\" data-element_type=\"widget\" data-e-type=\"widget\" data-widget_type=\"text-editor.default\">\n\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-container\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<p>Professor Jim Raymo responds to electronic versions of his students&#8217; papers, using the comment function in Microsoft Word. Note how engaged he is with the substance of his student&#8217;s research, how effectively he uses questions to guide and to deepen thinking, and how effectively he blends encouragement with criticism and advice.<\/p><p><a href=\"https:\/\/writing.wisc.edu\/wac\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/12\/Picture1-3.png\"><img fetchpriority=\"high\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone  wp-image-1298\" src=\"https:\/\/writing.wisc.edu\/wac\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/12\/Picture1-3.png\" alt=\"\" width=\"1035\" height=\"1142\" srcset=\"https:\/\/dept.writing.wisc.edu\/wac\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/12\/Picture1-3.png 1035w, https:\/\/dept.writing.wisc.edu\/wac\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/12\/Picture1-3-272x300.png 272w, https:\/\/dept.writing.wisc.edu\/wac\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/12\/Picture1-3-768x847.png 768w, https:\/\/dept.writing.wisc.edu\/wac\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/12\/Picture1-3-928x1024.png 928w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 1035px) 100vw, 1035px\" \/><\/a><\/p><p><a href=\"https:\/\/writing.wisc.edu\/wac\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/12\/Picture1-4.png\"><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-full wp-image-1299\" src=\"https:\/\/writing.wisc.edu\/wac\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/12\/Picture1-4.png\" alt=\"\" width=\"1035\" height=\"731\" srcset=\"https:\/\/dept.writing.wisc.edu\/wac\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/12\/Picture1-4.png 1035w, https:\/\/dept.writing.wisc.edu\/wac\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/12\/Picture1-4-300x212.png 300w, https:\/\/dept.writing.wisc.edu\/wac\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/12\/Picture1-4-768x542.png 768w, https:\/\/dept.writing.wisc.edu\/wac\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/12\/Picture1-4-1024x723.png 1024w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 1035px) 100vw, 1035px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/section>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>&nbsp; Professor Jim Raymo (Sociology) Professor Jim Raymo responds to electronic versions of his students&#8217; papers, using the comment function in Microsoft Word. 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