{"id":2085,"date":"2019-07-07T21:56:15","date_gmt":"2019-07-07T21:56:15","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/dept.writing.wisc.edu\/wac\/?p=2085"},"modified":"2019-07-23T02:50:09","modified_gmt":"2019-07-23T02:50:09","slug":"zoology-957-writing-assignments-and-peer-review","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/dept.writing.wisc.edu\/wac\/zoology-957-writing-assignments-and-peer-review\/","title":{"rendered":"Zoology 957 Writing Assignments and Peer Review"},"content":{"rendered":"\t\t<div data-elementor-type=\"wp-post\" data-elementor-id=\"2085\" class=\"elementor elementor-2085 elementor-bc-flex-widget\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<section class=\"elementor-section elementor-top-section elementor-element elementor-element-a274631 elementor-section-boxed elementor-section-height-default elementor-section-height-default\" data-id=\"a274631\" data-element_type=\"section\" data-e-type=\"section\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-container elementor-column-gap-default\">\n\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-column elementor-col-100 elementor-top-column elementor-element elementor-element-161f48c\" data-id=\"161f48c\" data-element_type=\"column\" data-e-type=\"column\">\n\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-wrap elementor-element-populated\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-element elementor-element-c730b1b elementor-widget elementor-widget-text-editor\" data-id=\"c730b1b\" data-element_type=\"widget\" data-e-type=\"widget\" data-widget_type=\"text-editor.default\">\n\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-container\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<h2 style=\"margin-top: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; font-weight: normal; line-height: 1;\"><span style=\"font-size: 19px;\">PROFESSOR PRASHANT SHARMA<\/span><\/h2><h2 style=\"margin-top: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px; font-weight: normal; line-height: 1;\"><span style=\"font-size: 16px;\"><i>DEPARTMENT OF INTEGRATIVE BIOLOGY<\/i><\/span><\/h2>\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/section>\n\t\t\t\t<section class=\"elementor-section elementor-top-section elementor-element elementor-element-1659777 elementor-section-boxed elementor-section-height-default elementor-section-height-default\" data-id=\"1659777\" data-element_type=\"section\" data-e-type=\"section\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-container elementor-column-gap-default\">\n\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-column elementor-col-100 elementor-top-column elementor-element elementor-element-0ef4437\" data-id=\"0ef4437\" data-element_type=\"column\" data-e-type=\"column\">\n\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-wrap elementor-element-populated\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-element elementor-element-412c232 elementor-widget elementor-widget-text-editor\" data-id=\"412c232\" data-element_type=\"widget\" data-e-type=\"widget\" data-widget_type=\"text-editor.default\">\n\t\t\t\t<div class=\"elementor-widget-container\">\n\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<p class=\"p1\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>1. Research paper.<\/strong><\/span>\u00a0 An important goal of this course is to teach you to examine and evaluate current literature on evo-devo critically. As a starting point, you will assume the role of an author and write a <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">minimum<\/span> 5 page (1-1.5 line spacing) research paper. Your paper will consist of one of the following:<\/p><p class=\"p1\">(1) Design a research proposal to test a hypothesis (a \u201cwhat-should-be-done-next\u201d paper).<\/p><p class=\"p1\">or<\/p><p class=\"p1\">(2) Review a major theme in animal evo-devo, where you take a stand on a particular issue.<\/p><p class=\"p1\"><strong>also acceptable (and <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">highly<\/span> encouraged):<\/strong><\/p><p class=\"p1\">(3) Develop a thesis chapter, manuscript, or preliminary\/qualifying exam proposal (if your research pertains to evolution, development, or both).<\/p><p class=\"p1\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Regardless of your topic, your writing assignment will include at least one figure of your own design<\/span>. Your figure can serve various purposes, such as illustrating current understanding of a topic or depicting the design of hypothetical experiments.<\/p><p class=\"p1\"><em>Due dates<\/em>:<\/p><p class=\"p1\">Declare topics, 20 October 2017<\/p><p class=\"p1\">First draft: 10 November 2017<\/p><p class=\"p1\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>2. Peer review.<\/strong><\/span> Another aim of this course is to introduce you to the peer review process and\/or refine your capabilities as a peer reviewer. You will exchange your draft with another graduate student. As a peer reviewer, you will write a <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">maximum<\/span> 2 page (1-1.5 line spacing) critique of your peer\u2019s research paper, focusing on major issues and providing constructive feedback for improving the draft. The exercise is double blinded.<\/p><p class=\"p1\"><em>Due dates<\/em>: Peer review, 17 November 2017<\/p><p class=\"p1\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>3.<\/strong> <strong>Revision and rebuttal.<\/strong><\/span> After reading over the review of your paper, you will prepare two items for submission:<\/p><p class=\"p1\">(1) The <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">final draft<\/span> of your paper.<\/p><p class=\"p1\">and<\/p><p class=\"p1\">(2) A <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Responses to Reviewers<\/span> document. This document (<span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">maximum 2 page, 1-1.5 line spacing<\/span>) should be formatted as a letter to the Editor, providing a point-by-point explanation of how reviewer comments were addressed, incorporated, and\/or rebutted. Rebuttals should be substantiated by reasoned arguments and\/or references to the literature.<\/p><p class=\"p1\"><em>Due dates<\/em>:<\/p><p class=\"p1\">Final draft, 8 December 2017<\/p><p class=\"p1\">Responses to reviewers, 8 December 2017<\/p><p>\u00a0<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"text-align: center;\"><strong>Evaluations of writing assignments<\/strong><\/p><p class=\"p1\">Writing assignments will be evaluated according to the six criteria. For each criterion, the assignment will be scored from 1 to 3, with 3 being the highest score. Criteria and explanations of the scores follow.<\/p><p class=\"p1\"><strong>Clarity.<\/strong> Is the writing sufficiently clear to convey its meaning to a general reader? Are concepts and hypotheses well explained?<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rank 1.<\/span> Written ideas are not clearly conveyed in multiple sections; abbreviations are not explained; either overly technical or insufficiently precise writing<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rank 2.<\/span> Written ideas are conveyed well, with few unclear aspects; reviewers will understand the broad meaning of the work, but will be left with some requests for clarification.<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rank 3.<\/span> Consummately clear writing that is interpretable by non-expert reviewers; complex concepts are methodically deconstructed; results and\/or proposed experiments are immediately lucid.<\/p><p class=\"p1\"><strong>Organization.<\/strong> Does the writing demonstrate a solid logical structure? For a research paper, are sections clearly delimited for (a) abstract, (b) background, (c) methods, (d) results, and (e) discussion? For a research proposal, are sections clearly delimited for (a) objectives, (b) rationale and significance, (c) hypotheses, and (d) research approach?<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rank 1.<\/span> Writing bears structural deficiencies; thoughts are incorrectly grouped in inappropriate sections of the paper; one or more sections are missing or highly underdeveloped.<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rank 2.<\/span> All sections are present and adequately developed; some ideas appear in unorthodox order that diminishes the cogency of the work, but these comprise a handful of exceptions.<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rank 3.<\/span> Every section is strongly developed; all higher concepts or hypotheses appear in a logical order, with downstream analyses\/proposed experiments supporting the broader theme.<\/p><p class=\"p1\"><strong>Use of literature.<\/strong> Are postulates appropriately supported by literature citations? Do citations follow a consistent format? Are all key studies germane to the topic included in the references list?<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rank 1.<\/span> Writing is missing key references or incorrectly summarizes cited works; multiple postulates lacking citations; inconsistent citation format mixes footnotes and endnotes, to adverse effect.<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rank 2.<\/span> Most of the relevant literature is appropriately cited; only a handful of missing references limits the completeness of the literature review.<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rank 3.<\/span> Writing demonstrates masterful command of the literature; all citations follow a consistent format.<\/p><p class=\"p1\"><strong>Cohesion<\/strong>. Is the entire work connected by a unifying set of ideas? Does the discussion\/research approach address the original hypotheses?<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rank 1.<\/span> Ideas are disconnected or fragmented across the paper; the end of the work does not connect with its premise; various ideas critical to the theme\/purpose of the work end abruptly and are left incomplete.<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rank 2.<\/span> Writing is broadly connective, but contains some loose ends; some ideas are extraneous to the theme\/purpose of the work, but this could be remedied by their deletion.<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rank 3.<\/span> A seamless work interconnected by its central ideas\/theme\/purpose; writing is focused and on target at all times.<\/p><p class=\"p1\"><strong>Conciseness and orthography<\/strong>. Are space limits used effectively for each section? Does word choice and use of the discipline\u2019s terminology serve to reduce wordiness and parenthetical explanations?<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rank 1<\/span>. Writing is very much under length, with allotted space not used to fullest extent or Writing is wordy and substitutes detail and summary spams for original analysis and contributions; various spelling and formatting errors that would outright disqualify the work from a journal or grant cycle submission.<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rank 2.<\/span> Writing is generally concise, but suffers from occasional word choice and orthography issues; a few terminological errors are present.<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rank 3.<\/span> Flawless writing demonstrates mastery of the discipline\u2019s terminology and standards; orthography and syntax are unquestionable; page limits and space are used to their fullest extent.<\/p><p class=\"p1\"><strong>Illustration.<\/strong> Does the figure clearly convey the ideas intended by its author? Is the figure interpretable by nonspecialists of the discipline? Does the figure legend address all the components of what is shown?<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rank 1.<\/span> Illustration is unclear or incorrectly tied to the writing; no figure legend present.<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rank 2.<\/span> Illustration is present, but requires some work to interpret; figure legend by itself is insufficient to understand the illustration.<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rank 3.<\/span> A self-explanatory image that both supports the writing\u2019s purpose and serves to make the writing more concise; legend is complete and detailed.<\/p><p>\u00a0<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"text-align: center;\"><strong>Evaluations of peer reviews<\/strong><\/p><p class=\"p1\">Peer reviews are graded according to two criteria. For each criterion, the assignment will be scored from 1 to 3, with 3 being the highest score. Criteria and explanations of the scores follow.<\/p><p class=\"p1\"><strong>Critical thinking.<\/strong> Does the review assess all key elements of the work? Does the review provide a rigorous test of the written ideas?<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rank 1.<\/span> Review is superficial or Review focuses exclusively on trivial elements of the writing (e.g., orthography; syntax; illustration color choice); most elements of the work are not assessed or are given the benefit of the doubt; reviewer incorrectly evaluates some of the work\u2019s logical bridges or procedures.<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rank 2.<\/span> Review assesses some sections, but leaves one or more sections of the paper unassessed; reviewer tests some ideas.<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rank 3.<\/span> Review rigorously examines each element of the paper; scrutiny of the review provides some new perspective and\/or ideas to the author.<\/p><p class=\"p1\"><strong>Constructive criticism<\/strong>. Is the reviewer fair? Does the reviewer offer solutions to conceptual problems that s\/he raises?<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rank 1.<\/span> Reviewer is unduly critical in an unhelpful way; criticisms imposed by the reviewer have no reasonable solution or are irrelevant.<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rank 2.<\/span> Reviewer is generally fair, but occasionally strays into unhelpful criticism (e.g., writing style or subjective comments).<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rank 3.<\/span> Reviewer is professional, balanced, considerate, and helpful in all criticisms; reviewer provides potential solutions to their concerns that the author can explore in their revision.<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"text-align: center;\"><strong>Evaluations of responses to reviewers<\/strong><\/p><p class=\"p1\">Responses to reviewers are graded according to two criteria. For each criterion, the assignment will be scored from 1 to 3, with 3 being the highest score. Criteria and explanations of the scores follow.<\/p><p class=\"p1\"><strong>Rebuttals<\/strong>. <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">In cases where the author did not accept recommendations of the reviewers<\/span>, are rebuttals to the reviewer effective and on target? Is the rebuttal convincing?<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rank 1.<\/span> Rebuttals are ineffective or unwarranted; rebuttals are excuses, not justified reasons for retaining the status quo; arguments take on a personal or offended tone.<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rank 2.<\/span> Rebuttals are generally effective; a handful of arguments are unwarranted and could have been better addressed through revision.<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rank 3.<\/span> Rebuttals have the cogency of a practiced career diplomat; arguments are professionally delivered and wholly convincing.<\/p><p class=\"p1\"><strong>Revisions<\/strong>. In cases where the author accepted recommendations of the reviewers, do the changes made by the author address the criticism effectively?<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rank 1.<\/span> Revisions are superficial or miss the point of the reviewer\u2019s recommendation; original criticism still applies post-revision.<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rank 2.<\/span> Revisions are somewhat effective; reviewer\u2019s recommendations are mostly met.\u00a0<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Rank 3.<\/span> Revisions are seamlessly integrated into the original draft, whereby the final draft is considerably improved.<\/p><p class=\"p1\" style=\"padding-left: 30px;\">\u00a0<\/p>\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t<\/section>\n\t\t\t\t<\/div>\n\t\t","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>PROFESSOR PRASHANT SHARMA DEPARTMENT OF INTEGRATIVE BIOLOGY 1. 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